I'm finally free! This week was pretty hectic and now I don't have to feel guilty about doing something other than studying :P
My papers were quite OK. I'm pretty bummed cause I don't I will be getting full marks in my Japanese exam because I think I screwed up one or two questions in my listening exam :-( but the results are in March and I'll worry then :P
Anyway, I had been meaning to put this up quite sometime back but exams came around and I totally forgot about it.Its a little something I wrote...the poet in me if I may say so.
Let me know what you think!
The Journey Of An Empty Page
The bareness seemed inviting
A drop of ink made it alive
It welcomed thoughts and opinions
It welcomed truth and lies
It was always non-judgemental
A writer's best friend
It bore the weight of a secret untold
Until the very end
It sharpened memories;
When dug through a pile
It brought smiles on faces
Like christmas morning for a child
It lived on for years to come
Through quarrels and the dust of time
The empty page that once provided solace, lay forgotten
Bearing painful rhymes.
I get these sudden jolts of creativity while day dreaming and I just happen to put it down in words.Wrote this one in 5 minutes by the way :P
17 comments:
The pretty lady is back !!!!
And how...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Girl, that was a fantastic piece. I loved the flow of the poem....the spontaneity and its lucid quality of rendition.
Good work sweets.
And oh, forgot to mention...love the new template...
Avril baby rocks...!!!
hey wb!!!
and so i must say your 5 minutes were extremeley well spent!!
wb dearie! ur new template is ideal choice for u! :)
ammu.
cindy,
why thank you *takes a bow* :P and yeaaahh u gotta love avril :P
sam,
thanks sam...and thanks for the text too! :)
ammu,
hehe thanks ammu!
i think it is refreshing. nice
thank you
hello!!! how u doin?
really really nice...love the simplicity of it. :-)
wb btw!!
duh i wish i cud get those sudden jolts of creativity...im alwys sleepin whn i get em i guess..
niceeeeeeeeeee
nice poem michelle....really tht created good memories...
but i suppose we are using more keyboard than pen and paper...
pity tht its happenin like tht in these days
daamnnn ur done w/ exams....i still have them till saturday... boo!
but after that a month of pure absolute funnnnn!! in indiaaa woohoo! haha
harshad,
hahaha thanks..n don worry...sleeping is sumtin i do 99% of the time :P
darkling,
thank you :)
karthik,
yeah that is sad...fr the record i did write this on paper first :P i can never write poetry on the comp!
anahita,
haha yeah i can see ur countdown on msn! :P all d best for ur exam!
hi michelle been a long time :)
the name michelle in chinese is
written "rice" and "snow"
pronounce as (mi xue) the reason is, there are some ppl who don't necesarry speak english very well. so for a chinese person,
they just use the characters to hopefully help them with words
is your holiday!! party party!
wow! thanks for the info dalicia!
Nice one there! :)
and u all ready for christmas?? and the most exciting part .. the parties?? the plum cake and wine .. aaah
When you do get through the exams.. be sure to pass sushi around.
And that 5 minutes sure seemd to be quite creative.
Cheers.
loon,
lol yeah kinda...thrs a christmas dinner @ home tomorrow lol
j,
thanks! :P
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