She apologised, I questioned.
She defended, I mocked.
She was ashamed, I tried to hide my hurt.
I forgave, but I will never forget.
Forgiving someone for hurting me probably won't make me a small person...but somehow I know for sure, that things won't ever be the same.
Conflict has become my worst enemy,
Love my eternal pain,
Happiness, a distant memory,
Tears, my only claim,
Promises shattered like a mirror
A mirror that reveals a reflection unknown,
My heart is piercing with betrayl,
By those who were friend but now are foe...
Yeah...a more ''poetic'' side of me.
21 comments:
And this is amazing!!!!!!!!
And forgiving someone is the best thing you kan do to let your mind be free.......
Smiles :)
words very well expressed!
its easy to categorize people who have read catcher in the rye and those who have not.. :D
thats v true dear. u can forgive anyone, or everyone.. but u'll nvr forget wht they have done to u. and u should nvr do.
cheers!
ammu.
I know what u mean. It's hard to forget. But don worry slowly it'll start to feel less important. Nicely put.
na... Im with ya. dont forget. bla bla bla on how u're a better person if u forgive AND FORGET. Fact is you're considered REALLY DUMB if u allow the same mistake to happen twice cos u let ur guard down.
=>prashant - yeah i know...
=>phoenix - thanks :)
=>raghu - i see...i accepted ur request on msn btw
=>ammu - yep!
=>pranay - yeah i know..time...thats all i need right?
=>roshan - i cud never forget this even if i wanted to :-)
i'm glad things have worked out for u...n i understand that u can never forget...sumtn like that happned to me too 3 yrs ago n i still am suffering from the repurcussions(sp?)
but hopefully everythin will turn out well in the end =)
it will don worry :)
Damn! This reminds me of my best friend and me. Hurting her and things never going back to being the same. :(
forgiving is the most beautiful but the hardest thing one cud ever do. I try telling myself I have forgiven some ppl but I dun think it's really FORGIVEN until u've FORGOTTEN.
what say Michi?
HUGGGGGGGGGZ!
Keshi.
That was the most amazin' poem I've read in a while, so true and expressional.
=>living on video - aww...don worry...patch things up while u still can :-) things might not be 'great' but at least they will be better than what they are now...
=>keshi - thats also true kesh...in a way i haven forgiven her cuz the fact that we're still nt quite on talking terms shows that...bt i can never be on bad terms with anyone and she really felt like shit...thats what i wanted right? ive put things on hold more than forgiving her
=>nefty - thanks :)
Its always hard to forget isn't it ... coz thats something you don't have a control on.
Very sweet poem .. I didn't know you had a poetic side to you :)
Cheerio girl!
Your welcome, I didn't know you wrote this! Lovely peice of writing;]
well thats a good start for a complete patching up.
Keshi.
=>loon gal - haha well i do...it just comes out more wen m sad or whatever lol
=>nefty - aww thanks :)
=>keshi - i don't think thats ever gna happen...bt at least we won't be at daggers drawn...or rather I won't be ready to kill her verbally(thats more than enough)
amazing writting!!thanx for sharing
thanks =)
that was a great piece and so true...you live and you learn.
yeah...thanks!
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